Friday, 5 July 2019

perfect play

Today we were performing plays in front of room 4 my play was called the perfect presentation.

In my group there was me , Jackson , Mackayla , Kloe , Jennifer and lily.

It was hard because most of my group didnt focus and said or did the wrong things.

A part i enjoyed was sitting down and listening to them saying ¨lets eat insects¨ ¨yeah lets eat insects¨

Please leave a comment if you liked it.

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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous14 August 2019 at 14:54

    Hi Miller my name is Tilly and I am a student at Marshland School.
    I loved your play because I really enjoy watching and being in plays


    This reminded me of the time I did a play in 4th grade


    Next time, Maybe you could add more detail and maybe practice a bit more so you could not use books.
    Why did you choose to do a play? Please check out my blog,

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    1. Anonymous21 August 2019 at 09:53

      i didn´t get to chose a play my teacher did and i will check out your blog.thankyou

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  2. Anonymous16 August 2019 at 11:53

    Hi my name is Mila from St Francis,Your slideshow play was awesome I loved watching it especially the part when you said eye contact.
    This reminded me of me and my friends doing a play together.
    Next time, you could maybe put some more acting in the play if you want.
    What was your best part of the play?

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    1. Anonymous21 August 2019 at 09:51

      i made half of the play and the best part of the play was when we walked in or when we ran around i needed to burn off some energy. thankyou for commenting on my blog

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  3. Anonymous16 August 2019 at 11:58

    This is amazing because you have got everything on a stage and you are organised.
    Did you know I like it because sum of you are sitting and standing
    Next time, you could be a little bit louder.
    Why did you do a play?

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    1. Anonymous21 August 2019 at 09:54

      i didnt have a choice and next time i noted that i could be a little louder

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