WALT: write a paragraph from the picture
As I walked along the path to the beach the fog started clearing and I couldent believe my eyes
it was just as I pictured it in the dream last night. The person in my dream said
that it was the land of gigantic things like there were scorpions the size of a double-decker bus
and that wasnt all there was lions the size of planes. The staircase was a fine purpley- pink colour
it had my favourite type of flowers down the side and it looked like it lead into a giant schorched
clouds. When I walked up it I saw all the brilliant animals in the sea. As I walked higherinto the clouds
my brsin started to switch off and it felt like a different person was inside me and was walking me around.
The End.
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