Thursday, 15 October 2020

My recount - Amelies b-day

 WALT: write a recount

This is my recount about something that happened in the holidays 

lots of other things happened in the holidays that were highlights

but I chose this one.

On monday the 5th of october i went to amelie's party remembering that oli was away and there was only girls  there, i was the first one there and we just waited for the others to come , when they came we ate some food and all the girls played something and i was on the trampoline. It took 1 long hour for the main event to come LAZER STRIKE!




We were driving in the car on the way to lazer strike i sat in the front and it was annoying because all of the girls were singing so i blocked my ears when i got there i was looking at the old games like pac man and space invader, then when the lady at the counter called we all ran through the doors in excitement just to see we were versing a dozen of teenagers 2 of the had to go on our team.





When you get a gun and a chestplate your gun says the name on it like mario or sonic or michelangelo, my name was donatello, and after the first round we went to the core board and i got best player and most accurate and our team won, everyone was like whos donatello and after the next 2 rounds i got best player twice and most accurate twice so i got best player 3 times and most accurate 3 times



That was my recount


Have you ever been to lazer strike? if you have did your team win or did you get best player?

1 comment:

  1. Hi Miller, I like how you picked this recount because it sound like you won one of the rounds goood on you! you made me remember of times I have played laser strike to. Next time maybe you could add what the teams were. Who else won to?

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